Richard Ogden (rao1@york.ac.uk)
Tue, 7 Sep 1999 16:36:03 +0100 (BST)
Enclosed is csl6.rtf.
Sarah made extensive comments over the weekend, and I think I've sorted
them out. I also removed nearly all refs. to "we/our" except where "we"
are being active. Where "the" or a passive could be used instead, it has
been.
Other changes: I think I've sorted out the way features are used. I've
changed Section 3.2 quite a bit and added an example/illustration, with
lots of help from Jill. There's a new section on temporal stuff.
I've removed the perceptual bits, since Sarah is working on those right
now. I'm still expecting comments/amended text from Jill and Jana, and
perhaps from Sarah on spectral detail.
I still need you to do the refs. for me. Would it help if I numbered the
places in the text where they are, and asked you to match biblio. entry to
number in text? Let me know.
If you have any comments on what might go in the conclusion, they'd be
welcome. I'll try and write a conclusion tomorrow.
The figures get more mangled each time they're rtf'ed. Ignore them, they
come out fine when printed out from the original files.
Thanks for all your work, esp. Sarah. I think it's starting to pay off.
Richard
Richard Ogden
rao1@york.ac.uk
http://www.york.ac.uk/~rao1/
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